|Cathica||2008.07.11 - 09:45AM||19: Chapter 15||Signed|
|Okay, this just keeps getting creepier, which is really saying something. So I take it the big showdown's coming in the next chapter? Can't wait. 8) |
Author's Response: Wow. I thank you - so very much! - but you\'ve now made me very nervous. I had no idea that the story was creepy at this, or any, point. That\'s probably a result of being too close to the story. As for a big showdown...hmmm. What I will promise is that I\'ll do my best to write up to your expectations!
|ERNest||2008.07.11 - 09:40AM||19: Chapter 15||Signed|
|Wow. This was a really good chapter. It was sad that Meg didn't really come back to life, but I liked the mistrust they showed the Voice. All the detail you put in about the extent of what the Facilitators had been doing was really scary, but well done.|
I can't wait for more! ERNest
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words. Describing a near fatal societal collapse takes a fair amount of thought, and I have to be careful when I work on it; glad to see that, so far at least, I\'m getting it right.