|Queen_Gwenyvere||2007.06.26 - 12:37PM||14: Chapter 11||Signed|
|::dances:: This just might be the best chapter yet, my dear. I love what you've done with it. The bit with Lynda and Davitch having a giggle fit was especially nice, a good change of pace from the seriousness of the story.|
Also, can I assume that in the next chapter, The Voice will tell all?
I can't wait :)
Again, wonderful job, my friend.
Author's Response: The Voice will certainly attempt to do so. I\'m reasonably sure she will succeed. Unless, of course, she doesn\'t want to - which is, admittedly, not much of a possibility. Thanks for your praise, and even more for all your help!
|shrak||2007.06.26 - 08:07AM||14: Chapter 11||Signed|
|Lovely. Just lovely. I've enjoyed each and every chapter (and interlude), and am impressed with how you've developed not only Lynda and Jack, but all of the secondary and tertiary characters. They feel like real people, and the clarity and comprehensiveness of your prose makes me view them as being in *real* situations. |
I've just discovered this morning that it's actually a bit dangerous to read this story at work, as it so completely sucks me in.
I look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I have succeeded at least partially in my job as storyteller if these characters become people for you, as much as they have for me. I have, I\'m afraid fallen into the worst trap for an author; I love them all. I hope you continue to enjoy this (whether at work or elsewhere)!