|It amazes me how well you capture and manifest a character who's inner workings are so surreal, and yet make them so clear. The Portuguese was a lovely touch.|
Cheers, love! Another lovely chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks QueenG - I was so enthusiastic about it that it wasn\'t until the last few paragraphs that I suddenly wondered whether readers would put up with the Portuguese. Which, by the by, came out of some corner of my mind that I hadn\'t thought existed. Another case of the story writing the writer.