|LadyCara||2011.05.29 - 08:36AM||15: The Parting of the Ways||Signed|
|Wow. Just wow. I wished I could write like that. This was incredibly powerful and I loved every single line. You made me laugh and cry (and I don't think that ever happened to me before over fanfic). Kudos. |
|reewees||2008.09.11 - 02:30AM||15: The Parting of the Ways||Signed|
|That was absolutely fantastic. You have really captured the essence of all the characters, filling in the bits we don't get to see on tv. I'm off to see what you have done for season 2 now. Do you plan on covering season 3 and 4 as well? |
|fennie||2008.04.10 - 07:10PM||15: The Parting of the Ways||Signed|
|Just discovered this story, read the whole thing in one go and thought I'd best review before I go explore what else you've written. This is gorgeous- evocative language, believable as the characters I love. |
I will definitely be coming back to read this again, and I rarely do that.
|blackcat||2007.05.09 - 02:16PM||15: The Parting of the Ways||Signed|
|I'm glad you're back with this story. I started following it months ago, then it vanished! Well-written aand true to the characters and their feelings. Well done! |
|wmr||2007.05.08 - 04:44PM||15: The Parting of the Ways||Signed|
|You're making me cry all over again! :((( Poor Nine. Poor Rose! This is beautifully done.|
And what I think is most effective about this chapter is the way you switched 'voice' at the end from Nine to Ten. The character voice in the penultimate section is so clearly Ten, from the babble to the different sort of inconsequentialisms that he uses and the different humour. So well done.
I'll look forward to the second half of this story - but I'm really, really going to miss Nine in this story, every bit as much as I miss him on our screens.
Author's Response: Well thank you for that response. I did quite enjoy finding the line between where Nine stopped and Ten began, and to have that appreciated is just lovely. Thank you for the review :)