|Catherine Spark||2006.06.26 - 06:24AM||1: Next Year||Signed|
|Yeah, I have to agree, it would have been nicer if Sarah had let Rachel take part in the end, and not squished her. Then again, I would add that it's understandable that Sarah would want to put all that behind her. And it's a good plot to bring that out. |
|Gary Merchant||2006.06.26 - 02:12AM||1: Next Year||Signed|
|I really liked the idea of an alternative Sarah and her daughter, but after a good build up, I thought the ending was a bit weak - I was left expecting more. But you caught Sarah perfectly - I could hear her in my head.|
Author's Response: I\'m not entirely happy with the ending myself. Hopefully one day I\'ll be able to revisit this.