|mrsbertucci||2018.02.12 - 09:17AM||1: Chapter 1 The Camping trip||Signed|
|I donít know how I missed this! This was fluffy but also fricken hilarious! I love the MacSmith family!!|
Author's Response: Thank you; I'm glad you found it!. I love them, too, and am having withdrawal without them in my life anymore, lol.
|Em Kay Who||2018.02.09 - 09:59PM||1: Chapter 1 The Camping trip||Signed|
|A very fun follow up! Well done :)|
Author's Response: It was fun to write. Thank you!
|TenRoseForever||2018.02.09 - 06:28PM||1: Chapter 1 The Camping trip||Signed|
|LMAO!!!! Oh, dear God! Never a dull moment, and clearly never a private one either!!! |
This was brilliant and completely hilarious! What a lovely wee sequel to your brilliant story.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it. One always takes a risk with a kid fic. Thank you one last time!
|WHOvian4ever||2018.02.09 - 06:26PM||1: Chapter 1 The Camping trip||Signed|
|I haven't laughed so hard in a long long time. Those barins are absolutely priceless!!! Oh my gosh, they are so clever and so curious and so smart!! Poor Rose and Jon don't have a chance with that wee group. And the entire family are sheep shaggers, OMG, I can just see one of them saying that to someone and then the other 3 will insist Da said it is so. How you come up with this dialogue is beyond all logic, you are truly amazing!!|
I think I have to say I like this fic better than anything you have written and that is saying a lot. The Transitions verse, Peter and Rose, the Raven and Rose, omg my previous faves just may trail behind Mac and Rose a wee bit. I hope those who are new to your writing will give your other stories a look-see. You are the greatest, Sister.
Thank you so much for bringing Jon and Rose into our lives!!!! 😘
Author's Response: You have to say that because you are my sister! I'm glad you enjoyed this last wee coda; I felt we all need a good laugh in this weary world. It looks like the bairns inherited Jon's gob at the very least. And poor Rosr dors have her hands full with essentially five children, if ya count Jon. It's one of my favorites, too. I just went back and read Raven and Motel Hell, and found myself wishing that I could rewrite so many bits, especially in Raven, now that my knowledge of alba has improved since I wrote it. Oh well, it's a done deal and both were enjoyed by many, many readers. See ya in a month!
|benty67||2018.02.09 - 04:32PM||1: Chapter 1 The Camping trip||Signed|
|So lovely and very enjoyable. Great addition to a wonderful story. Thanks for sharing. |
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
|Dreamcatcher||2018.02.09 - 12:07PM||1: Chapter 1 The Camping trip||Signed|
|Hilarious doesn't come close to describing that adventure...thanks for sharing!|
Author's Response: You are welcome, and thank you for your comments over this undertaking. I.m glad you enjoyed it.
|Bria||2018.02.09 - 11:40AM||1: Chapter 1 The Camping trip||Signed|
|What a hoot... and sheep shagging, rotflol! Quite an enjoyable evening even if Jon's plans didn't turn out like he thought!|
Author's Response: I'm thinking that not too many of Jon's plans have turned out over the last few years. Not with that lot! Thank you again for following and commenting!