|Dr_Tamwe||2007.02.26 - 03:17AM||2: Chapter Two: Familiarizing Yourself With Our System||Signed|
|"...like a one-Time Lord sendup of a Benny Hill sketch. " Awesome, it made me think of the occasional use of Benny Hill-esque humor in Tom Baker's time. Which is painful. But having Nine *think* it is flat-out hilarious. |
Great characterization here. Your plot is well-paced, your setting is vividly easy to picture, and Im really enjoying this too much to stop reading...
Author's Response: *does not hum the music* Thanks!
|drox||2006.02.23 - 07:09PM||2: Chapter Two: Familiarizing Yourself With Our System||Signed|
|Loving this intensely! Everyone seems perfectly in character, and now there's a delicious cliffhanger besides. You have made me a very happy drox.|
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
|Emery Board||2006.02.22 - 10:01PM||2: Chapter Two: Familiarizing Yourself With Our System||Signed|
|I really enjoy reading your style, with all those quips tucked into it. Loved the bit about Imelda ;), as that's what people call me!|
Author's Response: . . . that must be some boot closet. Thanks for reading; now hurry up with the next installments of *your* stuff! WANT READ!