|The Fantastic Alice Fox||2017.07.03 - 04:23PM||1: Planet Otium||Signed|
|This was a delight. I wondered if Otium was supposed to sound like 'Opium' and I think I know. I just read The Time Travelers and you really nailed Ian's feeling and Barbara's shyness. I'm never fond of how childlike Vicki is portrayed but it's pitch perfect for how everyone sees her! Yoi should write more stories with Vicki and either Ian and Barbara or Steven. But again I really liked it.|
Author's Response: Aww, thank you very much for the comment and for the compliments! It means a lot to me.
Heh, well I should be doing lots of things and I'd definitely like to write more (or at least finish some of the wip once again) and Vicki with Chestertons or Vicki and Steven are definitely my favourite teams that I would like to write again somewhen so yeah maybe the day will come somewhen :).
And no I didn't think of opium when naming the planet lol. I searched in Latin for the word that means peace, calm or so; and that's exactly what the word Otium means in Latin :). (and it was because of the first fanfiction with this planet that I wrote, but it's from Five era :) ).
Thanks again for your comment! <3
|Meadowlark||2015.08.04 - 02:45AM||1: Planet Otium||Signed|
|Aww, cute. The very last line was perfect. *sniffle*|
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
|Pendragon||2015.07.17 - 09:28AM||1: Planet Otium||Signed|
|Lovely. They were all very in character and aww flustered Ian when the Doctor offered the solution to the problem lol. Great idea and well explored. Vicki was cute and enthusiastic too which is always nice to read. Imagine two Vicki's forever though? Don't know how Ian would cope with that. :)|
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed the reading! :) Two Vickis forever would be very demanding for everyone nearby I'd say :D