|zanthinegirl||2009.07.30 - 03:09PM||11: Epilogue||Signed|
|What a cool story! Really enjoyed this one; it felt like an actual episode. Neat twists! |
|ponygirl||2009.01.19 - 09:37AM||1: Chapter 1||Signed|
|*here via Calufrax*|
ZOMG CLASSIC PLOTTY GENFIC WRITER-- WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN ALL MY LIFE!?
Seriously, how could I have missed this the first time around? It's wonderful. Amazing. Fantastic. If you're not already a professional writer, you should really, really consider it.
|amberowl||2008.08.30 - 02:29PM||1: Chapter 1||Signed|
|A great story, your charaterisation and plot are excellent. Really well written and a joy to read. |
|ClocketPatch||2007.02.19 - 07:01AM||1: Chapter 1||Signed|
|Wow, this left me with my mouth hanging open at every turn. The plot, the characterization, the general wowiness of it. Anything with Five is good in my books, an AMAZING story with Five just leaves me like a deer in the headlights. thanks. |
|KimotoCat||2005.11.24 - 07:43AM||11: Epilogue||Signed|
|I have read and enjoyed all of your stories, but somehow I think this one got to me the most. It was very well written, had a phantastic plot twist and all in all kept me up until far past my usual bedtime.
Really good story, Patrice! |
|Amber||2005.11.15 - 12:01PM||11: Epilogue||Signed|
|You can play a plot wonderfully. I have read 'Clutch of Circumstance' like 3 times now and love it ( why didn't many people review that because it's one of the best Five stories on this site... shame on everyone?) Anyway, in my mind you had to make an extra effort to surpass that story... this was it!
Well Done! |
|Elanor||2005.11.12 - 04:09PM||11: Epilogue||Signed|
|I have adored this story: the society you so richly brought to life, the TARDIS regulars - and a really good twisty plot. Like all the good mystery writers you gave us enough clues but still kept us guessing right up to the end. I am glad to see Nyssa getting a lot to do and, of course, I adored seeing all the hurt / comfort with Adric. Something else that always draws me to your stories is a believable 'adversary': Gerran wasn't evil - he was a man cornered who was doing what he thought was expedient for his people. If only they had filmed this as an episode. Write another story soon. |
|warinbabylon||2005.11.10 - 03:01AM||11: Epilogue||Signed|
|Patrice, I'm constantly in awe with your plotting abilities! This was a thoroughly enjoyable story with excellent characterization. Thank you! |
|TeganFan||2005.11.09 - 05:23PM||11: Epilogue||Signed|
|This was a great story and I'm sorry to see it end! Great job! |
|9sgirl||2005.11.09 - 12:40PM||11: Epilogue||Signed|
|What a great story. I enjoyed all of it. You write very well. I was thoroughly entertained. All the regular characters were kept in charcter. I look forward to your next effort. |
|Mouth On Legs||2005.11.08 - 06:28PM||1: Chapter 1||Signed|
|Hey now... don't leave us hanging too long.
|Dallista||2005.11.07 - 10:00AM||9: Chapter 9||Signed|
|Can't wait to see what happens next! Cliffhangers can be so cruel... ;) |
|9sgirl||2005.11.04 - 11:52PM||8: Chapter 8||Signed|
|Great continuation. You continue to keep everyone in character. I eagerly await more. Lisa |
|9sgirl||2005.11.03 - 11:56PM||7: Chapter 7||Signed|
|Poor Nyssa. Interesting notion of this touching of the minds causing these strange symptoms. I have an idea who the man is in the cave but cannot wait to see how this plays out. |
|9sgirl||2005.11.01 - 03:35PM||6: Chapter 6||Signed|
|I hope there is room on that seat for the rest of us. I am so close to the edge I am about to fall off. My nails are chewed to nubbins from the suspense. Great job. More, please!!! Lisa |