|ThroughanAmberFocus||2010.07.18 - 08:39AM||6: Chapter 4, Part 2||Signed|
|My heart aches for them a bit. I can't imagine how hard this must be for poor Rose. John's lack of confidence in his skill as a lover was sweet.|
Author's Response: Well, I take it that he\'s had no experience whatsoever -- at least that\'s how I understood the moment just before he kissed Joan in the episode.
|holidayrain||2010.06.13 - 01:03PM||6: Chapter 4, Part 2||Signed|
|Such a beautifully written chapter! I loved him telling Rose that he had erotic dreams about her, but him not knowing that it was actually Rose he was telling! Getting a little worried about the family, especailly with Rose being there!|
Author's Response: You should be very worried. Glad you liked it!