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| Allison EL Cleckler | 2009.09.15 - 05:33AM | 9: Chapter 9 | Signed |
| I have no idea what I just read, but it was AWESOME. You have an amazing capacity for description without getting wordy and I want to steal it. Author's Response: Thank you! That's very kind. If I'm really confusing you, though, I'm doing something wrong . . . hopefully the next chapter will clear everything up. | |||
| gnossienne_nr1 | 2009.09.02 - 10:48AM | 9: Chapter 9 | Signed |
| Wow, the last two chapters have been *intense*! The image of Donna's psyche/brain and the Doctor travelling through it is immensely interesting. I wish I could pay proper attention to all of the details, but every time I read it I get all pathetically weepy. Thank you for that last line of chapter 9; I was so afraid it was the end. Author's Response: Oh dear! *hands hanky* Sorry to have made you weep, and gratified to hear it--if that's not a contradiction. Read in good faith . . . the end is nigh, everything's cooking along again, and I appreciate the kind words. | |||
| Sally Scott | 2009.08.28 - 12:34PM | 9: Chapter 9 | Signed |
| So I'm rather addicted to this but it's not been updated lately. This makes me sad, but the breathing at the end makes me happy. As a result, I'm all confused aobut what to be, and I think the only way to make it right again is to have more fic. Please? Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the bump. More story is coming! I'm currently combing through the plot to make sure the end ties everything together . . . but it's well underway. Will post Ch. 10 when I return from vacation. Thanks for letting me know my story hasn't been forgotten! | |||
| novacancymind | 2009.08.07 - 10:59PM | 9: Chapter 9 | Signed |
| wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!! *runs around like chicken with head cut off* I'M HAPPAYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!! and the reason is you *points dramatically* i'd almost forgotten about this fic! don't do this to me again!!!!!! Author's Response: *Laughing* I hear and obey, O Headless and Faithful Reader! | |||
| ClocketPatch | 2009.08.07 - 04:26PM | 9: Chapter 9 | Signed |
| That's must have been hard as hell for you to write. I'm grateful though that you continued; I was pretty much sobbing by the end of that chapter, but then - oh Donna. Oh Doctor. This is the very definition of intense. Author's Response: Yep, I couldn't look at it for a while. I wouldn't have chosen to write about that particular experience. But in the end it was comforting, in a grim sort of way . . . Thanks so much for your review. It's great knowing you're invested in the fates of my (our? their?) characters! | |||
| LJG | 2009.08.07 - 04:16PM | 9: Chapter 9 | Signed |
| Donna breathes! -- You give a good description of the Doctor's travels through Donna's brain. I love the mix of anatomy and dreamscape. Thank you so much for adding to this story. I love it. Author's Response: *grins* Glad you liked it! I took your advice and slowed down a bit; was afraid I'd taken it too far, so it's nice to hear it worked for you. | |||
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