|Nancy Brown||2009.09.20 - 07:19PM||1: Chapter 1||Signed|
|That last line!! :D :D|
Author's Response: Thanks :)
|MichAre1a||2007.08.26 - 02:04AM||1: Chapter 1||Signed|
|lmao!! *gigglesnort* mounds hehehehe ;-D|
Author's Response: heaping mounds of moundy flesh!
|Lillibet||2007.08.20 - 03:54AM||1: Chapter 1||Signed|
|Loved Rose's pleas to Jack to 'make it stop'.|
Loved the Doctor's obsession with Rose's 'mounds'.
And loved this admission from the Doctor:...I can have sex with you and it will be kinky, but not illegal!"
Oh, promises, promises...
Author's Response: COULD have sex with you. Doesn\'t mean I will... ;)
|Mustang_bex1126||2007.08.17 - 06:54PM||1: Chapter 1||Signed|
|You're fantastic and I absolutely get a thrill seeing you've posted anything new to read, here or on LJ. BRILLIANT!|
Author's Response: aww :) I love to be loved. Really :)
|Fizzix||2007.08.17 - 04:27PM||1: Chapter 1||Signed|
|I LOL'd. Haha, no, really, this is hilarious. Truth serum and lying, though? Or can we fudge the truth under a truth serum? Er... *twitch* Whatever. Fun story.|
Author's Response: LOL that\'s why he had to confess to lying about lying right away ;)
|jessdoctorwho21||2007.08.17 - 01:05PM||1: Chapter 1||Signed|
|That was so fricking hilarous!|
Author's Response: thanks! glad you enjoyed!
|Raevyn||2007.08.17 - 11:37AM||1: Chapter 1||Signed|
That was adorable. Poor Doctor. Poor, kinky Doctor.
Author's Response: and you thought he hung out with humans cos he lies us so much :)
|mockingbird||2007.08.17 - 11:05AM||1: Chapter 1||Signed|
|Ha! That was an awesome way to start my Friday. The Doctor sounds like he'd be a fun drunk, with or without truth serum. Thanks!|
Author's Response: I\'m a fun drunk ;) hahahaha.
|TARDIS_stowaway||2007.08.17 - 10:30AM||1: Chapter 1||Signed|
|Ha! This is great goofy fun! I'm amused that Nine saying every little thing on his mind starts to sound rather like Ten, only more so. Two minor quibbles: |
(1) If he was under the effects of truth serum, how could he tell Rose that he was her father, even for an instant?
(2) "tied off in a firmly (but easily defeatable) square knot. " You probably want to lose the -ly for this sentence to work better grammatically .
Meanwhile, the ending was hilarious!
Author's Response: LOL you\'re right about that. I revised that sentence and didn\'t modify firmly :) thanks.
I think it\'s why he had to admit to lying about lying--the drug more made him say everything he was thinking than saying everything in a harsh Liar, Liar kind of truth.
(what i\'m trying to say is, look man, I was drunk--and i liked the lying about lying line hehe)
|Doctors_Companion||2007.08.17 - 09:03AM||1: Chapter 1||Anonymous|
|Oh...my dear Lord in heaven almighty. Why...just...oh my...see?! You've reduced me to garbled words of confusion! Wait, no...that wasn't garbled...and neither was that...well, I'll say this: it was good. And it scared me. And just out of curiosity...what possessed you to write this? And...do I even want to know?|
Author's Response: I was drunk, and somehow the first line came up in a conversation with a friend LOL. I was like DUDE THAT IS SO CRACKFIC! and before she could dissuade me, I was 250 words in.
|AnnieO||2007.08.17 - 08:59AM||1: Chapter 1||Signed|
|LOL! OMG I nearly feel out of my chair laughing so hard. |
Author's Response: I try. Thanks :) hehe