|KimotoCat||2007.11.02 - 02:39AM||1: Chapter 1||Signed|
|Your endeavours into the 10th Doctor worked really well. I could almost hear him from time to time, that's how spot-on the characterization was.|
The story was great, adding new meanings to the term "cliffhanger" - ;-) I really loved your idea of a rock-like sentient life form. It is so hard nowadays to invent new sentient beings for fiction!
Loved every bit of it - KC
|dblauvelt||2007.07.26 - 08:37AM||1: Chapter 1||Signed|
|The 10th Doc is spot on, as is Rose's energy and spunk. Loved the descriptions of the geology as well as the interaction of the main characters. Looking forward to their next adventures together! |
|warinbabylon||2007.07.26 - 05:03AM||7: Chapter 7||Signed|
|Excellent story, Patrice, and a great treat to see another story from you. I hope to see more stories soon! Thank you. |
|warinbabylon||2007.07.26 - 05:02AM||3: Chapter 3||Signed|
|As usual, a wonderful continuation! Great characterization and great flow. |
|warinbabylon||2007.07.26 - 05:01AM||2: Chapter 2||Signed|
|Great continuation! |
|warinbabylon||2007.07.26 - 05:00AM||1: Chapter 1||Signed|
|Loving this, Patrice and it's great to see a story from you! |
|littlemadame||2007.07.24 - 12:22PM||7: Chapter 7||Signed|
|Thank you, that was a lovely piece.|
I enjoyed it very much, the characters voices sounded very real, the setting is visually beautifully set up, the cliffhanger about Rose being dead was terrible (in a good way ;P ) and to have daily updates was nice too!
Will you write some other fics?
|wmr||2007.07.24 - 12:11PM||7: Chapter 7||Signed|
|I've just read this entire story and really liked it. Good, solid plot, excellent characterisation, more than competent writing style, dialogue that really feels like the characters, believable incidents and secondary characters - all the elements of a really good story. |
This, in particular, is so the Doctor:
"Absolutely" He adjusted his glasses. "Mostly." He twirled the screwdriver. "Fairly."
Excellent story! This deserves far more reviews than it's had.
|jammies2000||2007.07.20 - 03:20PM||5: Chapter 5||Signed|
|Oh please let Rose come back. She can't die like this. The Doctor needs her. This is a wonderful story. thx for posting. |
|Sournote||2007.07.18 - 03:10PM||3: Chapter 3||Signed|
|great chapter! |
|Tim||2007.07.16 - 09:40PM||1: Chapter 1||Signed|
|Hey, Patrice, good to see a new story from you. It's been a while. Nicely done! |
|kalima||2007.07.16 - 08:34PM||1: Chapter 1||Signed|
|Intriguing. Lovely world building (and the crumbling as well:-) |