|lyin||2008.08.21 - 11:28PM||10: Chapter 10||Signed|
|wow, a stunningly perfect fic- everything, the dialogue especially, but the emotions and the humor and other-worldliness (Disco Cricket! man-eating fire-breathing manatees!... well, 'manatee' sounds like it'd think we're tasty, once you think about it)- anyway, thanks for the fabulous read, it was pitch-perfect :D |
|Cybergirl05||2008.07.02 - 06:57PM||10: Chapter 10||Signed|
|Beautiful choice of poem. Goes perfectly with the equally beautiful story! |
|whochick||2007.07.29 - 08:22PM||10: Chapter 10||Signed|
|The best opening and finishing sentences ever found in a fanfic of any genre! You crack me up and choke me up all at the same time, you clever little thing, you. |
|Jula||2007.07.29 - 05:48PM||10: Chapter 10||Signed|
|That last line was the best line in a fic evah! Loved it!!! |
|RosesBud||2007.07.29 - 03:31PM||10: Chapter 10||Signed|
|Ha ha, fantastic. Loved telepathic crickets, tender Rose and her sudden tears at reading the poem and getting him a little more. Really great writing. |
|Howlcastle||2007.07.29 - 03:08PM||10: Chapter 10||Signed|
|Great chapter - loved the reappearence of Disco! Yay! Loved Rose's tender care of the Doctor, and the last line was a nice "Rose" moment. Also loved his half-comatose reaction to her cleaning his head/neck wounds... |
|DalekSteph||2007.07.29 - 10:04AM||10: Chapter 10||Signed|
|And we have a title! That is amazing -- I've enjoyed reading this stuff through you!|
And, Disco Cricket saves the day!! Very... hmm... nice...
And -- my chest totally ached when Coma!Doctor nuzzles Rose -- he really does have bad timing -- and he's a Time Lord, after all! Goodness!
I know I've said it before -- but you really can't update fast enough. I love this story. I absolutely love it.
Oh -- and Rose hasn't really taken care of herself, besides the loo & biscuits and all... I bet the Doctor'll be ticked when he does finally wake up. (UnLESS those are *special* gloves... That'd be cool too -- but everyone loves a Worried!Doctor....)
Bravo, again and again.
|DameRuth||2007.07.29 - 09:16AM||10: Chapter 10||Signed|
|Heh! Loved the comment about bad timing, and Rose's newfound understanding of the Doc's POV. Not to mention Disco Crickets. :D |
|Fire Storm||2007.07.29 - 08:53AM||10: Chapter 10||Signed|
|Cricket to the rescue :) Aww, this chapter was brilliant. I loved the last sentence. I dislike poetry really, but I still love this story. Can't wait for the next part :) |
|quiddity||2007.07.29 - 08:37AM||10: Chapter 10||Signed|
|Oh! It always makes me so happy when I see that you've posted! |
|Sournote||2007.07.29 - 03:59AM||10: Chapter 10||Signed|
|*wipes away tears* beautiful! I'm inspired to go and look up Tennyson's poetry now. Loved the Disco Cricket and its signpost. Very Douglas Adams :P |
|frannie||2007.07.29 - 03:57AM||10: Chapter 10||Signed|
|telepathic crickets. now thats freeking awesome. Yay. |