A Teaspoon And An Open Mind: A Doctor Who Fan Fiction Archive

Reviews For But Broken Lights

Cybergirl052008.07.02 - 03:48PM4: Chapter 4Signed
lol, poor Doctor. I loved your metaphore by the way. It matched perfectly with what Rose was trying to describe. Really well thought through.

Asano2007.10.16 - 01:13PM4: Chapter 4Anonymous
Generally speaking, I'm not an angst-hound like a lot of readers (not that there's anything wrong with angst) - but you've hit a really good note here with a poignantly beautiful analogy of their relationship - one that definitely hits a chord and makes sense. I really don't think I can come up with words enough to express how much I loved that scene where Rose explains it to him. That was just absolutely gorgeous.

DW_NuTs2007.07.22 - 05:24PM4: Chapter 4Signed
This makes their future seem so...bleak. It's horrible. But the story is wonderful! It cut me really deep when he told her not to follow him. He was just so rigid and straight forward, it hurt me too! :( Poor them. I hope they work it out.

Howlcastle2007.07.06 - 02:45AM4: Chapter 4Signed
Brilliant chapter. Loved Disco and Rose trying to figure him out, and the Doctor finding her and trying to hold back his anger. Rose's panic attack and it's clarity was wonderfully illustrated via buglore and the Doctor stalking off was sad and tantilizing. Can't wait to see what else you have in store. I just hope that there will be a light at the end of the tunnel somewhere!

DalekSteph2007.07.05 - 06:34PM4: Chapter 4Signed
This almost seemed too extreme for a reaction by Rose--but I'd be cracking, too, if I'd been through what she goes through mid-season... what with Sarah-Jane, Madame de Pompadour, & Mickey swanning off... She's only human.

I just hope the Doctor's alright--I mean, he does have superior physiology and all-- a concussion might not black him out for too long. I just hope Rose doesn't stay in the TARDIS getting over herself. He's the Doctor. Period. There are no rules!

Fire Storm2007.07.05 - 12:24PM4: Chapter 4Signed
I feel very very worried about Rose's sanity. But I am suprised it's the Doctor, not her in danger. Makes a nice change. But they definately need to talk.
Liked the Stone Rose reference by the way :)

jessdoctorwho212007.07.05 - 11:58AM4: Chapter 4Signed
Great chapter.

LilStarKat2007.07.05 - 07:14AM4: Chapter 4Signed
Oh i love this. I wonder what's up with Rose, she seems a little what shall we say stressed... but i spose the wither and die comment by the Doctor didnt do much to help.
I think the Doctor needs to sort his priorities and have a talk with Rose about their future, cos seriously its kinda messed up at the moment.
Brilliant, please update soon! =)




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