A Teaspoon And An Open Mind: A Doctor Who Fan Fiction Archive

Reviews For But Broken Lights

Cybergirl052008.07.02 - 03:21PM2: Chapter 2Signed
This is brilliant, I'm really enjoying it! Love the Rose Labrynth!! They're both perfectly in character.

DW_NuTs2007.07.17 - 04:05AM2: Chapter 2Signed
Just as she said she could now wander off cus of the string I imagined her somewhere in the maze, the string breaking and me go HA I told you so! in my head. I just finished reading the Stone Rose yesterday! I got the little mention! :) Yay me! Really like the atmosphere in this!

Howlcastle2007.07.02 - 09:03PM2: Chapter 2Signed
This continues to be well written and very compelling. The Doctor is perfect and Rose's thoughts are also portrayed really well with her bitterness and sadness ultinating between devotion. Please keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate the feedback. I\'m so glad the characterizations work for you - they\'re so much fun to write.

Jula2007.07.02 - 01:41PM2: Chapter 2Signed
That string is SO gonna die....

I am loving this! Please update soon! I love the bantering between the two, it's like watching an actual episode!

Author's Response: Wow! That\'s wonderful to hear. Thanks so much! As for the string...well, we shall see. ;)

Fire Storm2007.07.02 - 11:38AM2: Chapter 2Signed
I had to re-read this to understand what was going on, but I really enjoyed doing so. Oh Rose, so jeopardy friendly. Wonder how long that string will last...
Please update, I really want to see what happens :)

Author's Response: Thanks for rereading. I promise it won\'t be long before the next update this time. ;)

HonorH2007.07.02 - 01:48AM2: Chapter 2Signed
I'm really enjoying the mood, atmosphere and pacing of this story. It feels very intimate somehow. Lovely writing!




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