|betawho1||2008.12.12 - 06:21PM||7: In Your Dreams I||Signed|
|I love how you have the Doctor's dreamself shifting back and forth through incarnations, and the ghostly companions following him. You described it wonderfully, no words wasted but evocative nonetheless. Cool.|
Author's Response: Thanks! I was worried about getting the rigth effect for that, but since people seem to like that sequence, I can breathe a sigh of relief!
|Howlcastle||2007.03.28 - 04:29AM||7: In Your Dreams I||Signed|
|The Doctor's dreamself/ves was a nice touch, and you handled well with the use of breif description and hints like cane changing to umbrella etc. It was great. Looking forward to more!|
Author's Response: Glad to know that the Doc\'s shifting dream-form worked -- especially since there wil be a bit more of it in the next chapter. Thanks! Not having time to really concentrate on my long fic right now, mostly polishing short snippets that were already hacked out, but I hope to get back to thie story soon!!
|Emmapants||2007.03.21 - 03:50PM||7: In Your Dreams I||Signed|
|What an interesting chapter! I just loved how flawlessly he changed from one Doctor to another. Can't wait to see what happens next.|
Author's Response: Thanks! I was hoping the Doctor\'s dream-changing would come through well -- hard to keep it subtle but clear. More to come. Appreciate the feedback!
|Xephyrfox||2007.03.20 - 05:47PM||7: In Your Dreams I||Signed|
|Yay! A new chapter!! I can't wait to see what happens next. Post again, soon, please?|
Author's Response: Well, I just did, but not on this story - sorry! I\'m finding I seem to alternate between writing one short story and one long-story chapter. This story will have the next addition though, promise! Thanks for the kind review! :)
|Innogen||2007.03.20 - 11:09AM||7: In Your Dreams I||Signed|
|I haven't been on-line in a while. Wow, this story really has grown! Please don't keep me in suspense-I beg of you a new chapter! ::grin:: ~Innogen|
Author's Response: Aaaaah, sweet feedback! ;) Thanks for the review; I\'m definitely working on more (after all, that\'s the only way *I\'m* ever going to find out what happens, too!). :D