A Teaspoon And An Open Mind: A Doctor Who Fan Fiction Archive

Reviews For The Return

Slartibartfast2009.11.21 - 10:35AM1: Chapter 1Signed
I love your stories. I do. They're wonderful! But, please, for the love of god...
waist = stomach area
waste = poop
Misuse of this word makes me shoot milk out of my nose, making it very hard to get back into the story...ie, "He put his arm around her waste." Ewwww.

Author's Response: LOL WHOOPS. Thank you. Neither I, nor my betas caught it :)

Slartibartfast2009.11.21 - 10:22AM1: Chapter 1Signed
I love your stories. I do. They're wonderful! But, please, for the love of god...
waist = stomach area
waste = poop
Misuse of this word makes me shoot milk out of my nose, making it very hard to get back into the story...ie, "He put his arm around her waste." Ewwww.

Author's Response: :)

Ree9232008.10.28 - 07:49AM1: Chapter 1Signed
Beautiful and could realistically happen, as much as anything could realistically happen with the Doctor. Oral fixations are good.

Author's Response: as long as they\'re used for good, instead of evil :)

drummerspice2008.02.14 - 07:24PM1: Chapter 1Signed
Aw!!!!!

I usually never give a review with just that, but it's just that!

AWWW!

Author's Response: Why thank you!

Shen2007.10.11 - 03:53PM1: Chapter 1Signed
Adorable! "I found you I found you I found you!"

Author's Response: thanks :) glad you enjoyed :)

Zen Clarke2007.03.31 - 02:15PM1: Chapter 1Anonymous
I'm surprised I'm the first to be asking this, but...where that pic? I wanna see!!! :D Me likey da book!!! *adds to faves*

Author's Response: http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs13/f/2007/044/e/3/Happy_Valentines_Day__Rose_by_Yusagi.jpg (That\'s the URL of the pic) Glad you enjoyed the fic!

kiss_her_theta2007.03.30 - 11:59PM1: Chapter 1Signed
awww....*melts*

Author's Response: lol melts? hehe. OK i\'ll take it :) glad you liked!

anne3rose2007.03.30 - 07:59PM1: Chapter 1Signed
Awwwwwwwwwwww! How just awwwwwww!

:-)

Author's Response: thanks :)

Daydreamer2007.03.30 - 06:05PM: NoneSigned
*squee!* I love it. I love the way you write. It's just brilliant. But you knew that already. God a little bit lost mid way through chapter 2, but it all sorted it out in the end. Lovely lovely lovely.

Author's Response: glad we found ya again! and glad you enjoyed. Thanks very much :)

Fears Companion2007.02.22 - 11:15AM1: Chapter 1Signed
There really only one thing to say, and that's:

AAAAAWWWWW!!!!! How adorable!

Author's Response: thanks :)

MichAre1a2007.02.15 - 03:34AM1: Chapter 1Signed
That was totally wonderful!! Awesome end to my Valentines' day! :-D

Author's Response: Great :) Glad you enjoyed!

Fizzix2007.02.14 - 06:03PM1: Chapter 1Signed
Quite high on the giggle factor. And... as I read it on Valentines' day 'cause I fave'd you as an author... double giggle factor for that.

Actually, it's just been upgraded to teh squee scale.

Author's Response: Ooh. both teh and squee. I feel honored :) Honestly, I started writing it at about 1:30 in the morning and posted it about 4:30 in the morning... I have no idea what I even wrote at this point.

Lizbetann2007.02.14 - 01:21PM1: Chapter 1Signed
Best. Gooby fic. EVER!!!!!

Author's Response: Gooby? That\'s a term I haven\'t heard :)

CharmingSlayer2007.02.14 - 12:57PM1: Chapter 1Anonymous
Fanstatic! Brilliant! And any other word the Doctor has ever used!

Author's Response: LOL thanks very much ;)

diannelamerc2007.02.14 - 12:29PM1: Chapter 1Signed
Oh, that's perfect! Rose gets a chance to grow up a bit and get herself together... and still gets Best. Valentine's Day. Ever!

Author's Response: thanks very much :)




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