|If I were the Doctor I'd dump Jason. I don't like him. If you want to write good characters I suggest you watch the new DW show, Rose, Capt Jack, Mickey, Rose's Mum, the Doctor, the Prime Minister, all fully fleshed out and interesting people who can be nice and can be not nice etc. Jason simply isn't my cup of tea. I also find you write okay for the 5th Doctor (he's not really very personable to being with) but you really don't have a grasp on Doctor Four at all. |
Author's Response: Retaliation of this now banned individual noted.